This very much felt like an exhibition of skills. I agree with night's review. Structure and composition were pretty good but the sound while hypnotic, felt unimpressive and disjointed. I hope I don't sound negative or offensive but there's potential that I feel deserves better.
(This is supposed to be labeled as a collaboration, hopefully we can get that fixed)
Hope you guys like it!
I worked on the the actual bones of the track while he did most of the meat. I did the drums, the analog synths and chords and he added the melody throughout the verses and the cool outro.
When I was starting off with the track I wanted each verse to sound totally different from each other, and I think I got the job done!
Here is the soundcloud link: https://soundcloud.com/user-775956185/watermelon-seeds-with-concrete-castles
EDIT! It's now on spotify and other stores: https://distrokid.com/hyperfollow/concretecastlesandstankysauce/watermelon-seeds