Concrete Castles & Stankysauce - Watermelon Seeds
Jul 13, 2020
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This very much felt like an exhibition of skills. I agree with night's review. Structure and composition were pretty good but the sound while hypnotic, felt unimpressive and disjointed. I hope I don't sound negative or offensive but there's potential that I feel deserves better.
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Jul 13, 2020
thanks for checking it out! and what parts of the instrumental did you dislike?
Jul 13, 2020
The beat felt a bit too basic compared to the rest which was a bit weird and the synths felt out of touch. I don't dislike anything else.
Jul 13, 2020
you mean the melodic synths or the chords? thanks for this extra feedback also! and i wanted some simple drums to give it a sort of house feel, but i totally get it.
Jul 13, 2020
Melodic ones. And it's okay imo to use basic beats it's just that the rest were a lot more complex in comparison.
Jul 13, 2020
Yeah I totally get it. Thanks so much for the feedback! Hopefully helps us improve! I also have a solo single called So Many Pufferfish that I think is my best so far. I'd love to hear your thoughts on that too if you're willing to listen to more of my stuff!
Jul 13, 2020
I'll listen to it ASAP (◠‿◕)
Jul 13, 2020
thanks! hope you like it!
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