@nathan I think this is a good start and has potential! The intro riff is pretty good and hooks me, I like the use of tremolo during the beginning and very end to create the atmosphere of the song, and I think the instrumental is great! The singing is lowkey and fits the vibe of the song well.
My biggest problem with this track is the mixing. The vocals are buried in the mix when the instrumentals are present, and when the vocals are isolated, they are kinda loud because of the distortion ...
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