This has a lot of potential, actually, and the composition is good. The sound design is also remarkably decent for early Astral stuff, so that's a huge plus. Overall could use a little TLC but in its current state it's actually good.
This is kinda like Saga from an alternate reality. I think it’s interesting that it switches between 2 instrumentals. One of them is more rave like with these stabbing synths and the other is more chill with these weird synth string things. It doesn’t really stand out much in the —astral— timeline however, and it cuts off wtf —astral—
Retrospective review:
Meh. Really lacking in dynamic changes, though the different sections are interesting. The "breakdown section" fell completely flat however, and the beat has little to no variation. 5.5/10