Thanks for sharing this with me. Starting with the positives, you at least know how to make a song change up enough to earn its length. Sadly, the music itself needs a lot of work. You need to learn the fundamentals of composition before you can break the rules, as your experimentation and composition quirks are not working in your favor.
some cool ideas here and there but overall filled with baffling and amatuerish choices that definitely bring this down for me unfortunately. not horrible or unlistenable but pretty scattershot and needs work