I am 14 and this is deep.
WILLOW's debut is an ambitious one for such a young age but you can TELL that it's made from inexperienced hands. Not terrible, not good, it's... something all right. I don't know, so I'll just slap it with the good ole 50. No need to be mean to a first attempt. Plenty of promise is shown here, it just needs a lot more refinement and maturity.