SgtGuy

my balls hurt while listening

As the person who he dissed, this kind of sucks. I was left dissapointed throughout both verses. Although i cannot pinpoint all of the flaws, one major one is that the attacks are primitive and childish, mostly just claiming himself as the better and that he's the ''shark'' which is an insult to sharks, excessive usage on names, and reliance on Pyroomaniacal's past diss on me for verse 1.
Summary: Failed to diss me, primitive attacks and insults, reliance on max's previous work
The only thing ... read more

Personally the biggest problem with wraiths is probably that the vocals are monotone, and/or for some songs it feels like the instrumental and vocals are being held hostage. There is also a little mumbling problem, or they are kind of hard to understand. (also like it sometimes is kind of odd or meta, thigh pics and discord in the same song?)
As a result it gets progressively more difficult to fully listen to songs. Although i cannot be really too harsh since that is one of your earlier albums, ... read more

you as a rapper have a lot of potential, the music is actually pretty well made but the biggest problem is either your vocals are incomprehensible often or the music slightly towers over it, that or they kinda need a little more emphasis or emotion or some shit i'm not a critic
you really ought to fix that
There could be a lot of solutions but personally maybe put a little more effort on the vocals and all, or put more emotion/strength into them

overall 8/10, TLDR, music is actually good but ... read more